Does This Sound Right To You?
"Her son's pregnancy had been a high risk one for her, and had nearly killed her."
Is it just me, or is that sentence just...silly?
Did you perchance (like me) wonder what her son was doing getting pregnant? *g*
This by the way, was from a freebie book being offered by Phaze.
I'm currently trying to work out how many times I can mention Phaze on my blog before I'm accused of launching a witch hunt. *g*